Oh, wow. Your words are so simple, yet powerful. I love to be surprised in poetry, and the ending really grips at the heart...since it was so unexpected.

this reeks of frank honest emotion. marvelous.

Oh my! That was so sad! But even worse, I know this is a true story for so many people. The last verse was amazing though, it was really powerful. Great, great job!

O_O Oh my gosh, I relate to that 100 per cent. Just seeing it all before me brings tears to my eyes. Well expressed. Keep it up.

~Anna~ ^_^