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| T. Alice Fan 2008-07-07 ch 1,  | abuseOh, wow. Your words are so simple, yet powerful. I love to be surprised in poetry, and the ending really grips at the heart...since it was so unexpected. |
| Freaks for Jesus 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abusethis reeks of frank honest emotion. marvelous. |
| PocoSnow15 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abuseOh my! That was so sad! But even worse, I know this is a true story for so many people. The last verse was amazing though, it was really powerful. Great, great job! |
| Princess-anna57 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abuseO_O Oh my gosh, I relate to that 100 per cent. Just seeing it all before me brings tears to my eyes. Well expressed. Keep it up. ~Anna~ ^_^ |