 The Jynx of Kari 2007-05-13 . chapter 1he. greed sux doesn't it. i like the way it started with the rhyming. lol. i'm big on rhyming for some reason, it makes me think that a poem flows better but it's not always the case. sometimes rhyming could make a humorous point like this one did.
'You got all you need?/Got enough to buy your weed?' love it.
might as well read all ur things since i'm here,
__Kari |