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| beyond.that.horizon 2007-11-01 ch 1,  | abuse=] |
| ihrtbks 2007-07-31 ch 8, | abusePoor Ayden...which is why they say don't delay in matters of the heart! But I'm afraid I like Shay/Raya more. The entire birthday party was so SWEET! I love Coke! Can I have him, pretty please? UPDATE SOON! |
| mia5081 2007-07-31 ch 8, | abuseAw I feel bad for Ayden, but I mean, he did kinda miss his chance =( Update soon! ~Mia |
| bookworm925 2007-07-31 ch 8, | abusetoo bad for ayden... but good for raya and shay! i do hope they'll get together soon. =) anyways, so glad you updated! and this is a nice chapter! |
| §erge 2007-07-31 ch 8, anon. | abusehehe nice chapter.I liked it very much.I WANT MORE!! |
| serge 2007-07-26 ch 7, anon. | abuseThis is the best chapter untill now.Keep up the good work |
| Serge 2007-07-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseI know who Cornelius is,cause you told me.This chapter was very funny.I liked reading it. |
| VinceSarangsU 2007-06-14 ch 6, | abusehaha. "Keely" |
| keely 2007-06-06 ch 7, anon. | abusei like the lyrics "strawberry" |
| mia5081 2007-06-05 ch 7, | abusecraziness! i loved the song, did you make it up? update soon! ~mia |
| ihrtbks 2007-06-05 ch 7, | abuseNina's a b.tch; she can't win Logan by making him fight with Riley. I feel bad for Shay about Lena; you said head injuries, exactly what happened? So Raya is not totally over Ayden, but mostly right? I'm glad Shay has Raya to make him his old self; I know how heartbreaking it is when one of your old friends loses the spunk that makes them them. UPDATE SOON! |
| bookworm925 2007-06-05 ch 7, | abuse...om! the song... it hit me right to the bone... except for te last chorus... i have yet to find that someone... back to reality... the song's bloody brilliant! and as i was reading the part of the chappie with the song, it7s as if there was music... wa! |
| ihrtbks 2007-05-26 ch 4, | abuseI like the song, I wish I could write songs like that. All I can write is melancholy poetry my lit teacher calls 'unique'. Your story is progressing nicely. BUT YOU'VE WRITTEN A CLIFFIE! *scream* I'd much rather Raya be with Shay than Ayden. Is there a reason every kid in Raya's family has a name that starts with R? UPDATE SOON!! |
| bookworm925 2007-05-25 ch 6, | abuseohh... far, far from here! i' on the other side of the world! ahehehe... anyways... hm... why so short? nice though... shay got to meet the cousins! and they're so close... hm... what did happen to shay?? update asap! |
| SimplyBelievingJan 2007-05-25 ch 6, | abuselove the story. i've always wanted to go to California but i'm sure my mum won't let me since i live in asia. i've always wanted to study there. anyway., i really like your story and i find it interesting. hope you'd |