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| karatekid369 2007-09-18 ch 1,  | abuseI know how the narrator feels...the voices in my head dictate all I do. LOL, this was good, Raine! |
| High and Mighty Colour 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseyou. are. GREAT! that poem was so sad :'( i nearly cried |
| Stephanie Ridings 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad. I know this is pathetic, but I nearly cried at the last line. Now just looking at the title makes me sad, because I know the story behind it. :'-( Of course, I've got a bit of critique do dish out. This line: 'I believed them… it was my end.'. I don't think the '...' fits. A '-' would be more appropriate. That aside, I love it. A bit odd, the way you've described those voices in your head though, Raine... makes me wonder. Tsk tsk. |