SO FREAKIN AWSOME! The evil people are in jail(hate Charlie), Jayden is free & Seaton finally told him he loved him-its just wonderful!

So I've read this story like five times now, and it gets better each time. I was wondering if you like Twilight... Jayden got the series for his birthday, and Seaton's sister's name is Carley, which was Bella's other name for Renesmee. And I just realized that you were pretty young when you wrote this; your grammar needs work but you are fucking amazing.

Gah? Wah! It ended... Slightly unexpected... It was nice but what about mr. Spencer and the "groupies"? Will jayden ever go to college? Will seaton ever re-establish his relationship with his dad? I have so many questions...well I really do hope you create a oneshot that leaves certain questions answered. I wonder if jayden will ever visit his father. But anyway good er- Great Job, I really enjoyed reading this. Full of Angst and sweetness. I hope to see you in the future. Till then. Bye

I know it's pver but it would be awesome if you wrote a oneshot of their relationship! XD

It's good that you can feel how the story should stay. I'm happy with it, and so is Jayden, and that's good enough.

Wow, he's been bottling that up this whole time? Some crazy good stuff here.

Yikes. Seaton's dad is an AssHole. Looks like Seaton knows a thing or two about bad childhoods as well. All these poor, wounded souls. I hope they can make each other happy.

YAY! I was waiting for that. :3 Awesome job!

I love happiness after bad things. Good job.

:D Yay happiness in the (semi) end. I love the way Seaton and Mr. Spencer fight with each other, it's so funny. And interesting that May shot Jayden. Whoops. I hope the love interests make out soon.

? That was the most evil cliffhanger in the history of storytelling, wench. I have no idea what else to say, this whole thing is just so messed up.

Wow, I wouldn't have expected that from Corin. He's a survivor, too, and I hope a good friend for Jayden. Sorry I haven't been reviewing every time like before, I was just so impatient to get more of your story. I'm really glad Jayden is finally getting away from these creeps, and I hope the sting doesn't get him bashed up too badly. Lol poor Jayjay, he always gets beat up t some point XP. I love to hate to love your story in all it's violent, abused sickness, and I hope for this boy's future. You're a very good writer, to mess my mind up so much. :)

Wow. Seaton VS. Mr. Spencer kicks the pants off Seaton VS. Linda. Hahaa freaking awesome.

I Hate Charlie.

I want to see Seaton kick Charlie'ass!