Hmm. It's me again!
I'm liking what I'm reading so far. The interactions between Anne and her new roommates are very believable and logical. Also, Coby sounds so adorable!! I like him!
Anyway, I'll see you at the next chapter!
Ja-ne!
Lyn-san

Hello there. I've just finished reading the first two chapters of your story and I must say, you've caught my attention with this story of yours. I like your descriptiveness, and the dialog flows smoothly as the chapters progresses. My only suggestion is that you add the divider (or make one of your own) to your story to show scene changes. It makes it easier for the reader to recognize the scene changes (like the switch between the 'den' and Anne's troubles with her 'folks'.
Well, all in all it was a wonderful chapter, and I look forward to reading more.
See you at the next chapter!
Lyn-san

yay! i liked how you formated this chapter!

im reviewing!

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Hey,
I only read the first chapter of this one but it is so cool. I just activated an account so I will be getting my stories out there soon, although I don't think that anything that I have is anywhere near as good as yours. Keep writing becuse you are great at it.

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