interesting
complex yet simple

i like it

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i really liked this. the first thing that i noticed obviously was the cool shape of the lines. but then i read the words and i was like, that is a really cool poem. so i like it! and i'm adding you to my favorite author list!

I like this... very different, but in a good way. Good job!!

Ooh. That really affects me personally, because I shut myself away from people. The cellophane analogy is very apt and a little scary, so that it gets the point across well. Good observations. "Did I save myself? Yes." can be interpreted in different ways, and I'd kinda like to know what exactly you mean by that. Cellophane saves you from the fear of people, it keeps your "self" intact, but it kills your relationships, which are true humanity...that's what I got from it. Good job.

Great job! Another great poem!

Kali

Cool format. That was a really good poem..sad and happyish. Good job!

Could you please read some of mine? I think that you might like them.