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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseSadly that happens all the time. Great job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| EyesEmphatic 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing..I can relate to it entirely. Great job! |
| in a jar pk 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abusethis made me think of my little sister; she's an overachiever and i worry sometimes for her. well written. x |
| life like whoa 2007-04-23 ch 1, | abuseshort. sweet. simple. pretty good. =] |
| mindOFdeliriousUNREST 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abusewow i like this a LOT. it flows well, and the rhyming helps it out. it sounds realistic too. paz, -the delirious one |
| R. Louise 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI love it! |
| Icrome 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abusehm, makes you think a bit, enjoyed it |
| say this sooner 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abusei love this. great messege. nice work! |