Sadly that happens all the time. Great job!

Twilight Starr

This is amazing..I can relate to it entirely. Great job!

this made me think of my little sister; she's an overachiever and i worry sometimes for her. well written. x

short. sweet. simple.

pretty good. ]

wow i like this a LOT. it flows well, and the rhyming helps it out. it sounds realistic too.

paz,

-the delirious one

I love it!

hm, makes you think a bit, enjoyed it

i love this. great messege. nice work!