It's so twisted and crazy, but I love it. Too awesome! Keep up the good work, dude! This is badass!

there better be more to this story!

this is amazing work... i'm impressed... you've successfully expressed her dependence on him and the pain he offers her... and i FELT it... i felt a fragment of her pain - the part of it that i can grasp... kudos to you...

Wow...you are a fantastic writer. There are some grammar errors but this is just...horrifying and romantic at the same time. I feel that the story seemed rushed more towards the end but it was still very good.