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| Fantasyland 2007-06-21 ch 20,  | abusePERFECT! |
| Stolen Post-It 2007-06-21 ch 20, | abuseAww. That was amazing. That really is a perfect ending for Olivia (or is she going by Isabel now?). Crazy cat lady seems exactly how she'd end up, but it's not sad like the moniker would suggest. It was really wonderful. |
| HopefulAuthor 2007-06-17 ch 20, | abuse*clapclapclap* Te-riffic ending! |
| Fantasyland 2007-06-16 ch 19, | abuseThis was great ending, but I need some things cleared up! Like, why did the prince announce he was marrying Olivia, if it was Cinderella who he really loved? |
| Fantasyland 2007-06-14 ch 18, | abuseMore, please! But why did the prince agree to pretend that Cinderella was Olivia? |
| HopefulAuthor 2007-06-12 ch 17, | abuseThis is excellent! It reminds me of the theme in 'Wicked', but this is far better! It's fresh without being vulgar, funny without being corny, and amusing without being forced. I absolutely love the dialog, pacing, and little events in here. This should be published. Honestly. I am impressed. My only problems are some mild punctuation mistakes, a few awkwardly short or drag-on paragraphs. |
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2007-06-12 ch 17, | abuseI like your take on cinderella - it's so different! and much happier. the step-sisters aren't horrible, neither is the step-mother. |
| Fantasyland 2007-06-09 ch 16, | abuseOh...don't leave me at a cliffhanger like this!! Please update soon!! |
| thegreenincucumbers 2007-06-06 ch 15, anon. | abuseah, i loved that. but i keep getting this crawly feeling that somehow he'll end up still wanting to marry her. lol. even though it's cinderella, and we all know what happened with cindy rella. awesome chapter! |
| Fantasyland 2007-06-06 ch 15, | abuseThis is getting incredibly GOOD! I am so anxious to know more! |
| Fantasyland 2007-06-04 ch 14, | abuseThis is going beautifully. With alot of stories, they start out great but then the author doesn't know what to do with the story, so they start getting boring. This is not the case with your story--it's interesting and exciting all the way! Update soon! |
| Fantasyland 2007-05-30 ch 13, | abuseFabulous, once again! My applauds to you! Please write more! |
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2007-05-28 ch 12, | abuseI love your stories. They're so easy to read and laced with amusing and interesting plots and just little things that make the story so much more enjoyable. I think I can guess that the Prince becomes enamored with Cinderella before his twentieth? That would be nice because there's no romance between Olivia and him at the moment, so the whole triangle thing wouldn't be a worry (I hate those!). And I like Olivia's character; she's very refreshing- in fact, every character you've designed have a unique quality about them. Lovely! |
| Fantasyland 2007-05-27 ch 11, | abuseWonderful! You have a way of packing so much into one chapter and not making it seem crowded. I had been waiting for an update. Love it! Write more. |
| Fantasyland 2007-05-22 ch 10, | abuseThis was truly an excellent piece of work. More than excellent. I don't know how to describe it. This seemed just like a real book, and I think you should consider publishing it. (After you have it all written, of course--speaking of which, please write more SOON!) You are a talented author. |