cinderella is a friggin loony! hahahahaha! she cracks me up. i kind of wanted olivia to end up with the prince. but a psychopath is okay. ahhahaha

Wow. Freaking. Perfect. You have quite some talent for taking a very cliche story and making it a refreshingly new experience.


FAVORITING!! :D




-Stace :]

PERFECT!

Aww. That was amazing. That really is a perfect ending for Olivia (or is she going by Isabel now?). Crazy cat lady seems exactly how she'd end up, but it's not sad like the moniker would suggest. It was really wonderful.

*clapclapclap*

Te-riffic ending!

This was great ending, but I need some things cleared up!
Like, why did the prince announce he was marrying Olivia, if it was Cinderella who he really loved?

More, please! But why did the prince agree to pretend that Cinderella was Olivia?

This is excellent! It reminds me of the theme in 'Wicked', but this is far better! It's fresh without being vulgar, funny without being corny, and amusing without being forced. I absolutely love the dialog, pacing, and little events in here. This should be published. Honestly. I am impressed. My only problems are some mild punctuation mistakes, a few awkwardly short or drag-on paragraphs.

I like your take on cinderella - it's so different! and much happier. the step-sisters aren't horrible, neither is the step-mother.

Oh...don't leave me at a cliffhanger like this!! Please update soon!!

ah, i loved that. but i keep getting this crawly feeling that somehow he'll end up still wanting to marry her. lol. even though it's cinderella, and we all know what happened with cindy rella. awesome chapter!

This is getting incredibly GOOD! I am so anxious to know more!

This is going beautifully. With alot of stories, they start out great but then the author doesn't know what to do with the story, so they start getting boring. This is not the case with your story--it's interesting and exciting all the way! Update soon!

Fabulous, once again! My applauds to you! Please write more!

I love your stories. They're so easy to read and laced with amusing and interesting plots and just little things that make the story so much more enjoyable.

I think I can guess that the Prince becomes enamored with Cinderella before his twentieth? That would be nice because there's no romance between Olivia and him at the moment, so the whole triangle thing wouldn't be a worry (I hate those!). And I like Olivia's character; she's very refreshing- in fact, every character you've designed have a unique quality about them.

Lovely!