this is really sweet and beautifully written... i love how you say you dont do this, but you do do this... its a great contrast

It was either this one or "I trust you". This one stuck with me more, so I decided to comment on this one.

First off, I have to say it's very cute. This may be a word you might take offense with and i'm sorry if that's the case, but it is how it came off. I assure you I mean nothing negative or demeaning by it. I really enjoyed this poem. A lot. My favorite line is "You dream my worlds up with me and make the strangers stay behind". To me, that's a beautiful line. To be able to find anyone able to do that for another person is practically a blessing - I would call it as such anyhow.

I am so fond of the honesty here. I wish I could write in such a way that was as raw and untainted as this. Most of the time i've noticed, you can find beauty just as easily in complexity as well as simplicity. This hits a home run in my ball park. I think I take with me more the idea of your writing, rather than its structure, although the structure is not lacking anything that I can see for the moment. I could only suggest using less syllables when using this rhyming scheme to make it more fluid. Other than that, great job.