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Reviews For: The Sickness
plumblossom 2008-06-12 . chapter 1
This is lovely. It looks like it could either stop right here or go somewhere else. Which do you have in mind? I like this guy, bitterness and all.
Limited Edition 2007-06-29 . chapter 1
Hahaha I absolutely love the first part. It's hillarious. I can truly imagine it and the dialogue (monologue rather...) brought a smile to my troll face. I love the expressions used, they're original and yet serve their purpose. They're rather funny too. I think the first and last part are neatly wrapped together and the story fulfills it's purpose. Good work!
Jetknee 2007-04-30 . chapter 1
Wow. That was an incredible story. The last part made me want to cry. I loved the Eleanor Rigby quotes.
Nenphis 2007-04-21 . chapter 1
I liked it! I think it was very original the scene with the unfaithful woman, Evan's attitude, and I liked the rest of it too :) cheers!
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