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| plumblossom 2008-06-12 ch 1,  | abuseThis is lovely. It looks like it could either stop right here or go somewhere else. Which do you have in mind? I like this guy, bitterness and all. |
| Limited Edition 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseHahaha I absolutely love the first part. It's hillarious. I can truly imagine it and the dialogue (monologue rather...) brought a smile to my troll face. I love the expressions used, they're original and yet serve their purpose. They're rather funny too. I think the first and last part are neatly wrapped together and the story fulfills it's purpose. Good work! |
| AamericanRejectgirl 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was an incredible story. The last part made me want to cry. I loved the Eleanor Rigby quotes. |
| Nenphis 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! I think it was very original the scene with the unfaithful woman, Evan's attitude, and I liked the rest of it too :) cheers! |