my (very reilgous) grandmothr was reading this over my shoulder (I didn't know it) and her face was priceless. It was AMAZING!

Where do you come up with these stories? They are great...I dont know about you but i find it really hard to write one shots and you are really good at them:D Thanks for posting
Rayne

I LOVED IT...Write more, Write more!

PLEASE...

A-MA-ZING! That was just... *sigh* I don't think I have any words for it... *happy sigh again* (I keep doing that IRL too ^^) It's just... so deep and incredible and believable... the things that the parents say are a little cliched, but I know that there are people in the world who would say such things. That's just... *happy sigh* It's amazing and awesome and... *happy sigh again*

Keep up the excellent work!
Lots of

This was so great! and it was one of those stories that I will remember completely because it stands out so much from every other story I have read.

How do you come up with this stuff! It's amazing (as usual)!
I couldn't write somthing like this for my life. You're genius I tell youi! Genius!
XD

hi, sorry this is abit late, but anyway, i LOVE yaoi so much, and you pretty much nailed it on the head. great one-shot.

:D

xemeraldeyesx

p.s thanks for the review of Telling the truth :D