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amythestpony
2007-04-22 . chapter 2
ooh! and the plot thickens, i wonder what's going to happen next, update soon please!
Celtsea
2007-04-22 . chapter 2
Interesting...Not the type of thing that would normally catch my eye. A few paragraphing/grammar issues but I am too tired to go into detail now. Bit short, but I will continue reading.
amythestpony
2007-04-21 . chapter 1
update soon, great start so far!
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