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| amythestpony 2007-04-22 ch 2,  | abuseooh! and the plot thickens, i wonder what's going to happen next, update soon please! |
| Celtsea 2007-04-22 ch 2, | abuseInteresting...Not the type of thing that would normally catch my eye. A few paragraphing/grammar issues but I am too tired to go into detail now. Bit short, but I will continue reading. |
| amythestpony 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abuseupdate soon, great start so far! |