I absolutely LOVE! School Dance. You explained everything perfect; the ending note is perfect! You also have fantastic spacing in the lines...
"Airplane..." was still pretty good. Confused about the identity of the person she's wondering about (ex bf/perfect stranger), but I love the airplane references.

i like them both. =]

"Warrior Writer" is pretty cool! I love the imagery, and the new way of looking at writing...!

With "Untitled", I like your use of italics...
"Before they were Legends" touches a part of society that we really need to get rid of - the constant paparazzi of people who only star in movies.

WOW - Imagined Perfection hits you hard... it's very beautiful!! The last line makes it perfect.

Darling's slightly cliched, but if you feel it, you mean it, and it's very pretty in that way

"Life's Tragedy" is very pretty...

"11:59" is very beautiful - i like descriptions of the moments just before...

i've noticed that u use a refrain/repetitive line in almost every poem. works nicely w/ most, but gets a little old.

was 'legends' written about/for a certain celeb? wondering...

Imagined perfection is perfection. the best i've ever seen! my def favorite. you rock!

i love the rhythm of 12:00
does BC know u have this?
so inspiring

hehe!
i think #1 should be renamed. i dunno, kind of blah. like poem, just need name change
i stink @ poetry. u have so much raw talent, i'm jealous!

you are such a good poet.
every word fits, it sounds so professional.
you should be proud. =]

i love gypsy queen!

its an unexpected topic-and you meet the challenge beautifully. =]

A Potential... - I like it - it's a fresh perspective on high school relationships. Usually, it seems one sided, but this attraction is beautiful because it's (maybe) shared. I love it!

Gypsy Queen - AMAZING! Very inventive! almost paradoxical, you know? I really love it... the way you phrased it and everything makes a great impact. SUBMIT THIS SOMEWHERE! hehe...

My favorite lines:

This weathered gypsy queen-
Not even free to reign over herself.

I've almost forgotten how entrancing your poetry can be, dear. It reminds me (once again) of those days now passed...

oh, here comes the rain of Nostalgia peltering upon my hands. Why won't the government release time machines to the common public again?


~ARS