This was really cute, but also a bit sad.

Her thoughts were so realistic! You have such a great writing style!

OH! And your name is from "It's not a Fashion Statement, It's a F-ing Deathwish" by My Chemical Romance!! I LOVE THAT SONG!! THE WHOLE ALBUM!! *ahem*

But yes, this was very good! ^_^

This alright, it kind of needed more depth with her emotions.

Isabella.x

I really like it, its really how the mind sounds like when you're in love =P well keep writing, you've got talent.

your obedient servant,
G.I.A.M.P