 Singingperson 2008-05-14 . chapter 1It's been more than a year since you've updated this!
Get to it!
I would love to continue to read it. :) |
 Georgia Mud Fudge 2008-03-24 . chapter 21please update soon.
i really love it. |
 MelGrl 2008-01-11 . chapter 21O, I hope Lily will get better. When will Tuesady and Alistair ever get together?!?!?!?!!?!?; the supsense is too much! I can definitely see some couples in the bloom. ;)
Update soon! ^^ |
 urjellingcauseimevil 2007-07-09 . chapter 21happiness all around. much love update soon pweety please?
Peace.Love.Update.Kira |
 Sweet Mary Jane 2007-06-01 . chapter 1Whoa, first of all, where is this school that doesn't start until nine o'clock? I would like to transer to such a humane institution. I have to be in class by 7:35 am, and my bus gets there at seven. :(
But, anyhoo, excellent beginning. Your writing is realisitc and very well done.
Just a few nitpicks . . .
"Time for school nerdy beanpole” - as well as a few other instances ("That's right younger brother!") are grammatically incorrect. You ALWAYS need a comma before a name when that person is being addressed. So, it should read: "Time for school, nerdy beanpole.” Ya know? Actually, this whole chapter has a serious deficiency of commas.
Also, I'm not sure what "further know as" means. I thought the saying was "also known as." Could be a regional thing, of course.
"her brother’s Adrian’s" - just "her brother Adrian's."
That's all for now! Again, awesome so far. You've got me very curious about this SA fellow. |
 choppa173 2007-05-19 . chapter 21Yay a new chapter! I'm glad they're ok, and sebastian likes Lily, should've seen that one coming but i didn't. A nice chapter hope you feel better soon |
 TheOwlIsWhisperingMoo 2007-05-15 . chapter 21Why thank you! I like my penname too hahaha. I haven't reviewed since last time thanks to my 'life-cold' and lazy bum! Chapter 19 was very fun to read and I think the prank was a good idea. Chapter 20, hm, i liked the part when the guys were staring at Tuesday and Lily..hilarious. The accident sort of bummed me out but I reckon it made the story a little more realistic. As for this chapter I think it has good material, I'm glad the girls are recovering. Oh and I hope you get better! *sends you pink e-tulips*..since they are my favourite flowers. Cheerios. |
 angeleyez61888 2007-05-13 . chapter 21Yippie this was an awsome chapter even though it was kinda sad but atleast she up. poor Lily and Alistair is awesome. i understand about the computer i have one thats just over a year old and works like ** it made me said cause somthing happen and it kicked the bucket i somethimes think it's from typing too many stories on it lol... well i can't wait until the next chapter to see what happens, and i hope u get better... |
 Pieces of the sun 2007-05-13 . chapter 21Oh my gosh! No one died, thank God. Cause that would've been tacky. I'm happy that they're all right though. It's sweet how tuesday's accident made Alistair show his feelings for her. |
 Americas-1Reject-Gurl 2007-05-13 . chapter 21aw, i love the poem you used it was so sweet! It fit so well! I really hope you can get some more chapters up! |
 Americas-1Reject-Gurl 2007-05-13 . chapter 20OMG! That was so sad i hope no one dies! I wanted to cry! aw! |
 SimplySweetnSour 2007-05-12 . chapter 21haha, surprisingly, i've never thought of chinese food when i made/read my SN/pen name. lol Dr. Reynolds reminds me of the reynolds aluminum foil. is that where you got it from? |
 LifeisCereal 2007-05-12 . chapter 21Aww this was a nice chapter. I wish Alistar could kiss her again xD
and thanks, I think my s/n is pretty spiffy too. :P |
 kstar129 2007-05-12 . chapter 21I like rambiling and i kno what u maen with the car,well it applies to my room anyway!Terrifical story!Ha!Another word!LOL!
Hurry up and get better!And i kno what u mean when u said the guy stuff! |
 mia5081 2007-05-12 . chapter 21lol i love alistair. btw, i don't think smoking and being sick is a good combo, but hope you feel better anyways and UPDATE
~mia |