|Reviews for The Bluest Eyes|
| katydid2363 11/20/08 . chapter 1
I was looking for something to read the other night and stumbled upon your story. This was one of the best ones that I have read on fiction press. Now I'm going to read the sequel which I'm sure will be just as good as this story was.
| bignsassy818 11/11/08 . chapter 34
I love it how their love is genuine and you can clearly see it in the way they interact with each other. The way someone can write it so well is just magical. I loved the epilogue and so glad that you're doing a sequel even if it's indirect. Really amazing work!
| bignsassy818 11/11/08 . chapter 33
Truly and amazing story and I think this is worth publishing. Very well researched. I've seen the character developments, the evolution of the plot and it was wonderully written. Normally, I don't take the time to read completed works in fictionpress but I have to say, I enjoyed reading this story and anticipating it's outcome. I wanted to see how Rayne would accept Matthew and vice versa. There are a lot of memorable moments in this book such as their first date, the elevator, the club, the fountain, new years, when Matthew fought David and especially, the graduation. I thought that was the sweetest proposal ever made and it just made my heart melt. YOu're writing style is truly captivating and catchy. I love the wit and it was very descriptive. I admire you for writing the fight scene beautifully because those are hard to write yet you managed well. Great work on this and I look forward to reading more of your other stories. Just bear with me and give me time.
On the side note, if it would not offend, I would like to make some suggestions. You're obviously British due to the spellings and the phrases such as "twenty killometers odd". If you're trying to write something set in America, you should align the text with the setting as well. But that's fine because no one will notice much. I hope this last part did not offend. I really admire your writing skill.
| Eccthlacine 11/1/08 . chapter 33
| LupusAries 10/23/08 . chapter 34
Great Read! I especially like how you told the story from both of their viewpoints. Excellent work! Ill stay tuned for updates on Simply sophie
| liveonluna 10/4/08 . chapter 34
Aww. What a great and romantic and sweet story! Great job! D
| Suave Dares 10/3/08 . chapter 34
Wow, awesome story ! At first, reading the review, it sounded very much like ' Life Is Beautiful' but it really did have a unique plot, and the more I read, the more I wanted to read.
Great writing, and nice ending. Good job,
PS: You're from T.O ? I live around the outskirts.
| Elle Winters 9 9/10/08 . chapter 19
.. but didn't she need contacts?
| MonkeyStar 8/31/08 . chapter 1
I have read this story a thousand times! i love it!
| jayc3218 8/24/08 . chapter 34
Wow i love the story it was beautiful i just couldn't stop reading i was so sad when i reach the last chapter i never wanted the story to end but the whole story was awesome Rayne and Matthew made a beautiful couple the depth of the characters amaze me!
| Night-Rayne 7/21/08 . chapter 33
This turned out to be a really good story!
| BOokWoRm1491 7/7/08 . chapter 34
abso-freakin-lutely loved it! wow i just couldnt stop reading! you did a great grand job with this one and i cant wait to read about Sophie!
| Booklover91 6/28/08 . chapter 33
aw! i loved this chaptter it was sweet! Matthew was so sweet! I love how he decided to popose to her...hehehe
| Booklover91 6/27/08 . chapter 15
how did i KNOW that was his sister? haha i know Rayne feels dumb...i'd go crawl in a corner...bahaha
Gosh...i'm embarrased for her! :/
| Booklover91 6/27/08 . chapter 2
this is going to be SO interesting, i can tell..let me go and do some more reading :]