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codyismypup 2008-07-21 ch 28,	abuseYou whore. Haha. I just spent the last long while reading this entire story. Yeah, I know, 'How could I? It's awful'cringecringecringe. But still. You whore. I loved it! You should've kept this last chapter as an epilogue. That would've been brilliant. Hmm...the entire time I was thinking about Edward and Bella, comparing Twilight to this. I couldn't help myself, sorry. This is so good! Sure there were a few grammar/spelling mistakes but hell if you didn't have them, I'd hate you. What is everybody's obsession with the name Seth? Myself included, you know. God, if there were a list of sexiest names, Seth would be at the near top. Now, which ones the sexier Seth, yours or mine? Yours is certainly nicer. Mine's all 'Fine, Harper be a bitch! Psh'. You killed off her mom! You whore! Haha. Cool ending and twist. Lol, I loved how you were obsessed with RJA. I love them. I saw them in concert, however and don't kill me for saying this but, they weren't very good. They weren't in sync, you know? But I still enjoyed it because all of them had long black hair that just floated in the wind. T'was funny. Okay, it's kind of 5 in the mornin where I am, so...yeah. Later, -RAR
ShadowedBlind 2008-05-04 ch 28,	abuseI can't believe I wasted my money on Twilight when I could've read this instead. This is haunting and I love it.
awesomelyme 2008-03-22 ch 28,	abusePlease write the sequal!
Among-the-Vampires 2008-02-21 ch 28,	abuseAmazing. I loved it. I do hope you contiue this story. Its very good. And i just love it. Update soon!
Gentle. Edge. 2008-02-02 ch 27,	abuseThis was such an awesome story but the last chapter seemed like a cliffhanger to me. But then again, you said you might have a sequel so I understand why. Really good story :)
Gentle. Edge. 2008-02-02 ch 26,	abuseI love that last line. "I knew that that second would last a lifetime." Such an awesome like. I wish Seth would randomly pop up again and beat Demetrius or something. :P
Gentle. Edge. 2008-02-02 ch 25,	abuseDemetrius is a jerk. >.> I kinda expected his plan but I wonder if Seth will agree to it.. Awesome chapter :)
Gentle. Edge. 2008-02-02 ch 23,	abuseAw :( I can't believe Everett died! That's so unfair! I feel so bad for Charlotte too... :(
Gentle. Edge. 2008-02-02 ch 18,	abuseI really liked this chapter. The conversation was really good but Derek was kinda random. And I liked how in the end Alessa was saying how she loved and trusted her mom now even though before she was all "I hate her blah blah she doesn't understand anything."
Gentle. Edge. 2008-02-02 ch 17,	abuseThat's a surprise that Landon betrayed her. But I like the twist. Awesome story :)
Gentle. Edge. 2008-02-02 ch 1,	abuseI liked how this chapter told us so much about the characters. It was really interesting and I can't wait to read about her move. :)
Faith Adeline 2008-01-02 ch 28,	abuseI think you described the transformation really really well. A lot of people tend to make it glamorous right from the get go. I liked it, and I hope you find your muse for this story again. Very good! Faith Ps- I updated From the Ashes, just wanted to let you know :)
Stahlut 2008-01-01 ch 28,	abusethis wa sso awesome, and I still love the charcters. and I do hope that you will one day write the sequal although i do undertsand if you dont get around to it. or are unabel to. but I really hope you do, coz I love it.
Bipolarised 2007-12-14 ch 27,	abuseomg, that was...gee, i dont have the words, but i cant tell you that it's bordering mangnificant, spectacular etc. tell me please when you will be writing the sequal and happy writing!
Morbidly Sarcastic92 2007-12-03 ch 27,	abuseHoly shit dude. I just read the whole thing. YOu better make a sequel or I just might die.

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