Aw that was so sad! How to fix this... I guess I'll find out when you update again!!

Oh! PLEASE update soon! I have to do homework, so no long reviews today... :-(

sunflowersing

Yay an update!! I think it's so cute how she took ht little boy with her!!

Woo! Sounds like we might have to change the rating from T to M! ;-) Great chapter! UPDATE SOON!

sunflowersing

I am in love with this story! you got a new fan ^.^ please update soon!

THAT WAS A FRIGGIN AWESOME CHAPTER! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEASEE update soon! Keep up the great work!

sunflowersing

heheh! pretty please UPDATE! i want to know what happens next lol! poor ellen..

CREEPY! Ah! Excelent chapter! A few changes could be made, however. Right after the note left, you said "he" and "that bastard", but how does she know its a "he", and who this said "bastard" is? Also, at the end of this chapter (chapter two), it says "End Chapter THREE". Other than that, it was awesome. Update again soon!

sunflowersing

Great story. Keep going can't wait to see what happens next

I like! I like a lot! XD Please UPDATE! Aw, poor Adam...lol!

Great start to your newest story. It says complete on the title bar thingy, but the way you ended it seemed like its going to continue... Are you going to post new chapters? If so... update soon! :-D

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