 Amarone. 2008-06-15 . chapter 1Aww...this is really sweet :) The ending is beautiful - "With a heart of glue//That his paper one can cling to" - That captures MY heart haha...Btw, I noticed this was written over a year ago ...I hope you found that special someone by now, and if not, then soon :) |
 emoXbunny 2007-05-27 . chapter 1flippin awsome man like message me or what ever i write poetry too i dont have ne on the site yet though i just joined today...i should quiet rambling now but great poem yay u |
 PocoSnow15 2007-04-21 . chapter 1Oh, that was so beautifully written. I just loved the first verse, it sounded so awesome. Don't worry, you'll find some one! Anyway, really well written! |
 Ashelin 2007-04-21 . chapter 1The last lines were sadly sweet. I understand the feeling you have [except I'm a girl]. "Paper covers rock" I don't know why, but when I read that line it made me think about when our hearts break, we try to defend ourselves by becoming cold and not really loving people. Using people. Like when the paper is torn away nothing is left but rock. Yeah, it was weird. But your poem was wonderful! Great job! |
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