|Reviews for T e a r s|
| Artemis Anderson 9/16/07 . chapter 1
Sad but beautiful.
| Ironic Presence 4/26/07 . chapter 1
That was beautiful... I could really feel the tears, the heartache, behind the words. :,(
| continuous brevity 4/22/07 . chapter 1
i liked the part when you were talking about a choking sound erupting, it created a nice image.
| Kate Collinson 4/21/07 . chapter 1
you have some typos like "do you seem them?" but i actually thought that it was pretty good!