Have I told you how much I love your poems? I completely see it, as if I was looking at pictures and not words. Very cool, kinda creepy, but cool.

I've never asked, it's never really come to mind, but you don't really 'trip on acid' do you?

Pretty spiffy.

I love the repetition, and my morbid mind adores the overall darkness of the poem.

as a writer, i gotta say nice job.
as your girlfriend, i'm scared again

...uh geez, Im gonna cry that was some deep ** from a thirteen year old...anyway i liked it...and shankz for the review too...

Whoa! u [the character] killed while on acid. interesting. nice imagery, makes me wonder. . . u sure u're not on drugs?
lol, J/K
__Kari

meh...for some reason I was expecting something trippier who a sad ending...the suicide was a nice touch...anyways I like this!

I really didn't expect the ending. It's a good poem, you're not as crazy as I thought (from the boob poem). Keep up the good work. :)
Pheo~
Toxic+Rhythm+Jester