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| Needa S 2008-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseSad but beautifully done. Write on! |
| LittleDoe 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseIn a pleasent way, I don't know what to say... this has captured my imagination and is now running away with it... who is this girl/women? Who are her people's oppresors? How dis she end up in prison? What is her homeland like? Why is song important? Is she ever going to escape? What's going to happen? Did anyone hear her sing? If so, what was their response? Keep on writing. God bless you. ~LittleDoe |
| beefbag 2007-04-23 ch 1, | abuseMe likes! I could find no issues with it. I'm looking forward to the real thing! Is this the beginning or the middle? I'll review if you will etc. |
| Arianna Sterling 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abusePersonally, I like it. It's detailed, but not too detailed, like what some authors do- Tolkien, for instance. And I'm fascinated by the whole singing thing... I would read on if not to just find out more about why singing is so important to this character. In fact, I do believe I will read on once you put more up. P.S. If you could do me a favor and take a look at my story DarkWorld. As of when I'm typing this it's only going to be the prologue that's posted, but a story is a story. Presently I only have my friends as reviewers, and God knows they're rather biased. |
| Gypsy Pink 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseVery sad and beautiful. A lovely preview actually for any story. I look forward to reading the whole story. |
| Amethyst Asheryn 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It makes me wonder about what the whole story is about. :):) Now I look forward to reading tha actual book. Tschau! *Ashe* |