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unshattered
2007-04-22
ch 1,
abuseWoah, I never thought I'd find someone who truly hates a person as much as I do.
I feel that I understood every hateful word you wrote and it was very powerful.
atticflower
2007-04-22
ch 1,
abuseWow, you've put alot of passion into this, I can see that.. This poem's very intense and I'm sad that you feel this way.. Wonderfully written though.. P.S As lockna2 mentioned: it did drag on abit but they're your feelings & it was still a great poem nevertheless..
lockna2
2007-04-22
ch 1,
abuseum... its intrasting .. and its good to get ur feelings out like that reveal the truth though i a guy myself i am pritty sure he already knows well leaving it at that ...

oh p.s the ex-best guy friend need serious reconsideration cause it dosent flow to well ex best frind may be ... n the whole thing drages on a bit much but still keep it up
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