That was pretty, and very sad.

Wow. From reading the summary, I thought this would be something totally different... Glad to know I thought wrong. I could've expected a poem filled with reflections on sadness, but then it would've been a little too predictable. The lines "Solitary drop on the windowpane//Looks like a tear but I swear its rain" kept echoing in my head after I read the poem. Those lines really stuck out and brought the poem to life. Well, to me at least. Good job!

Write on!!

That's sad.

I love this. I get the picture of a creepy little girl singing this in her own little tune.

Beautiful pacing. I read this outloud and enjoyed it very much. You used a simple vocabulary to explore deep emotions and I think it worked very well.

definitely know the feeling here. so very true. nice metaphor!

I like this, but the missing apostropes (which is a really annoying word to spell) distracts from the emotion

This is practically heartbreaking, and so terribly relatable. Wonderful job, I loved "Single drop on the windowpane/Looks like a tear but I swear to God its rain" Beautiful. Great job.