Reviews for Solitary drop - FictionPress.com

Falaba Todd 2007-06-23 ch 1,	abuseThat was pretty, and very sad.
Nonya Soum 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseWow. From reading the summary, I thought this would be something totally different... Glad to know I thought wrong. I could've expected a poem filled with reflections on sadness, but then it would've been a little too predictable. The lines "Solitary drop on the windowpane//Looks like a tear but I swear its rain" kept echoing in my head after I read the poem. Those lines really stuck out and brought the poem to life. Well, to me at least. Good job! Write on!!
storykeeper 2007-05-02 ch 1,	abuseThat's sad.
Patricia Louise 2007-04-30 ch 1,	abuseI love this. I get the picture of a creepy little girl singing this in her own little tune.
ADSpencer 2007-04-27 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful pacing. I read this outloud and enjoyed it very much. You used a simple vocabulary to explore deep emotions and I think it worked very well.
recycle rhymes 2007-04-22 ch 1,	abusedefinitely know the feeling here. so very true. nice metaphor!
Jordan Storm 2007-04-22 ch 1,	abuseI like this, but the missing apostropes (which is a really annoying word to spell) distracts from the emotion
Ashelin 2007-04-22 ch 1,	abuseThis is practically heartbreaking, and so terribly relatable. Wonderful job, I loved "Single drop on the windowpane/Looks like a tear but I swear to God its rain" Beautiful. Great job.