   Professor Doctor 2007-06-23 . chapter 1That was odd. Well done, though. |
 storykeeper 2007-05-02 . chapter 1I like it! |
 Patricia Louise 2007-04-30 . chapter 1Nice little rhyming scheme. I loved it! |
 recycle rhymes 2007-04-22 . chapter 1i know the feeling all too well. nice work... |
 asimpleromance 2007-04-22 . chapter 1wow this is very good. i love the repeativness (i cant spell)
"Delirium
A noiseless scream
Delirium
A shapeless dream
Delirium
A faceless smile"
thats my favorite part. |
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