|Reviews for To Live a Long Life|
| Celtsea 4/23/07 . chapter 1
First, I want to say not to let lack of reviews make you stop writing, personally I have made that mistake before and it nearly ruined my life.
Anyway, back to the story itself, the formatting caught my eye. Though I really have no idea why. Only one thing about this concerns me, you always seem to do this:
“Hey!” I shouted playfully, snapping her fingers under his nose. “You better be happy this is an all-girl’s school I’m going to, Christopher! Or you might have some major competition.”
It could be turned around so the action came first. Good work, I will keep reading, but I lack the time today. Tommorow, I swear.