I love you -re writing that is (cause, you know i dont know you and all ;p) the whole both persons perspective was really cool :D

That was so beautifull :O I loved it 3

Sweet, fluffy and beautiful. Great job.

This is a sweet story. I like the 2nd person perspective. I thought the atmosphere and pacing were spot on. The ending is a bit dissatisfying - it feels like an empty gesture to me. Something more conclusive would have been fulfilling.

Great one-shot! Even though I wish more happened romance wise between Simon and Charlie, I liked how you ended it. Great job :)

I was really, really impressed. Seriously. You did an amazing job of capturing such heart-wrenching tenderness in your words, and bringing both Simon and Charlie to life. I envy your excellent use of rhetoric, as well as the way you structured their two interwoven stories. There were a lot of really clever moments that made the story resonate on a symbolic level. And I think it wouldn't have turned out quite as beautifully if you hadn't told the story from a "you" perspective - it gave the whole story a very unique, deeply applicable feel. It's a very gentle story, of blundering love and true love and sandcastles that can be rebuilt even as they crumble. And I love it to pieces. Thanks for making my day. I'm sure I'll read it again many more times :)

God, why are all your stories so heart-wrenchingly beautiful?

I can't even decide if I like Simon or Charlie's POV more.

Charlie was a little more unexpected I guess, because for half the story I was convinced he was straight.

Ha.

This is seriously one of the best stories I've read here. I'm bookmarking this story and coming back to it again. And this is one of the highest honors there is.

You are truly great, you are.

Because I just HAD to review - something I don't do much.

But on a side note? Proof reading might help, because I'm pretty sure I noticed one or two minor typo errors.

Much love.

TT_TT it's so sweet. I lurve this so much

Fantastic story. Atmospheric, loved both viewpoints.

Awesome story! Extremely well written! D

Amazing, even if it was written in second person. For something so short, I fell completely into it. And so, to give it the credit it's worthy of, it goes on my list.

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This was great.

I don't even know how many times I've read it now. 0_0

It was SO good.

So great.

I'm pretty speechless.

And it's so sad.

I loved the ending.

You didn't really expand on their relationship but it was better that way. :D

Thanks for a great read. And that gas station scene was so heartbreakingly cute. D:

Aw this story was so touching. I loved your use of 2nd person pov. This is only the 3rd story I've ever read in that format.

Aww this is amazing, sequel?