Very sweet. I would have liked a little more resolution in the ending, but I can fill in the blanks. ;)

Sweet.

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Aw, so cute. It's sweet how they get each others signlas mixed up. They are so adorable. I liked reading in Charlie's POV better though ... Don't know why, just do ... I love this, although the ending was pretty open-ended.

Gosh, that was beautiful. I love how you showed both sides, and how they both want each other but they're both so oblivious to one another's want.

There's only one word for this: beautiful.

I was like hurry hurry hurry and get together already! Lovely story.

That was a beautiful story!

;_; I hate you.

You are amazing. You should write more! Long stories! Youre so good! Rawr!

very emotional story! I especially like the writing style you used, writing in 2nd person. Creative!

Through this whole thing im like "CANT YOU SEE IT! YOU LOVE EACHOTHER! WHEN WILL YOU TWO FINALLY NOTICE IT!"

So the ending was what i wanted, ended so nicely. I loved it. Great fic. really. _

Wow. That was really really good. My heart wrenched a few times reading this _; I loved it soo much. Awesome ending as well.

Man my heart broke at the end of Simon's perspective. completely broke. But anyways, awesome awesome awesome one-shot. I dont usually like the whole second person perspective, but this was good _

oh this was beautiful. thank you for sharing!