I really like this piece, for whatever reason. In its simplicity, yet complex metaphor (I am still not quite sure what the metaphor may be) it really sort of has a Zen-like quality about it. It definitely reminds me of some of my early work when I was experimenting with getting away from disgustingly depressing love-poem stuff and into something more lighthearted. Keep it up, keep writing, and keep it real! Can't wait to see more.

This makes me smile. I'm not sure it it has spiritual value, or any significance to anything going on in your life, but I actually find it humorous.

Hm, different.

Dreams are strange things, aren't they?

Rowan.