That's very... angry. Good but I think with a little less aggression the poem would have been one of those that stirred people into doing something about pollution/global warming/animal spieces extinction/etc. I did like it though. You should submit it to an earth magazine.

I decided to read this because at the time I was listning to Bright Eyes' 'Four Winds' and it was at the "The ** of Babylon" part. Coincidence? Anyway, my favorite part of this poem was "From oil-dependent turkeys and jackasses
Lord knows more evil is a-lurkin'"

Great job.

Peace and Love

~> Lifted