Powerful writing.

By the words of the opening lines, "while Satan consumed the voices of the crowd,"...gives an excellent reason of why one should consider whether or no that they will be, "going along with the crowd." The need there is to get away from the crowd and think for oneself.

Wow, very powerful. I think some of the descriptions are a bit redundant, but that could be easily cleaned up. Good to see religion still flurishing.

I love this cuz it gives you a great visual of His resurrection. It's very descriptive.

I am suprised you didn't mention Jesus asking God, "Father, why have You forsaken me?" But that's totally okay because this is your piece and it is beautiful as is.