|Reviews for Shoelace Heart|
| Basara 4/24/07 . chapter 1
kind of delayed yet makes one think of the hanging line...
| CrazyTurtles 4/22/07 . chapter 1
I love the image you made here. The idea of a heart being like an old shoelace is easy to relate to and see. Great job as always.
| Ashelin 4/22/07 . chapter 1
I like it, but the second line was left hanging. Did you mean to do that? I loved the image you created though! I can see my shoelaces unraveling and my shoes falling off. Ok, I think I will stop freaking you out now. Great poem!