kind of delayed yet makes one think of the hanging line...

nice...

I love the image you made here. The idea of a heart being like an old shoelace is easy to relate to and see. Great job as always.

I like it, but the second line was left hanging. Did you mean to do that? I loved the image you created though! I can see my shoelaces unraveling and my shoes falling off. Ok, I think I will stop freaking you out now. Great poem!