powerful descriptions... definately gets the point across of what could be

"Weeping self

Indulgence will not

Flourish change

Yet waves to beat

The rocks into

Submission"

--That was my favorite part of this poem, although all of it was so powerful, so strong. The raw emotion and conviction in this really made it shine. Excellent work!

Great poem that has the same cynical outlook on the ** we all deal with that I do. Society needs a kick in the head to make it see. This is I suppose a start..

A voice in the wilderness maybe, but a voice of pure poetry: passionate, compassionate and, as ever, a voice to be listened to. Welcome back, Fabian!

beautiful, passionate and meaningful as always fabian!

Emma