I love it. It's pretty, in a bittersweet way, and all the words just slot together like they're meant to be there. Which is the scary part.

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Great poem.

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Beautifully written poem even if it is tragic.

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It is definitely sad when there is no difference to someone. Nice work.

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It's sad to wake up alone in the morning. Nice work.

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Great poem. Nice title. Liars--who likes them?

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That's so tragic. Reading these makes me want to cry. Great job on getting your feelings out.

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This is so sad. Great job on expressing yourself.

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Good poem.

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Nice usage of "Peter Pan". Good work.

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Well worded poem. I like the last line the best.

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Good poem. It seems like we always fantasize about things that don't end up happening. Nice work.

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omg these were all really amzing!! i loved them all!! theyre so sad and so blunt in such an effective way. i love their shortness too - and they all have something people can relate to. can't decide about my favourite-theyre all so good!

They do seem very cohesive, to me. My favourites were 'That Birthday Surprise' (it made me laugh!) and the last two. I especially loved the line '‘cause people too often mistake tragedy for beauty'; its just so true.

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