Best friends/enemies, huh? Cute. I like how you incorporated culture into this with the arranged marriage and all that. Careful when you write; you've misspelled/misused quite a few words and you've switched tenses. But this story shows a lot of potential, especially if they end up having to get married! (**)

So, I'm guessing they might have to get married to each other. Can't wait to read more!

the background of the story is kinda different... i like it. though the story is only starting, i find it quite interesting. please update soon.