 dragonflydreamer 2009-05-24 . chapter 1Nice haiku. I always find writing an interesting topic to write about because it's so relatable on a website about...well...writing ^^
The personification of your "Muse" is also something that a lot of people can relate to, but you really did a good job of making her a very distinct entity. I could almost picture another person there over your shoulder as I was reading this.
I love the second line. It creates such a beautiful image.
Also, the flow's great. The breaks created by the lines are natural, so I can read this through without any awkward pauses.
Very nice work for such a short piece.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile) |
 Jazzball 2009-02-15 . chapter 1Very nice, mines mia, I like how you used the title as part of the poem... sort of like another line |
 Kenna-Kat11 2007-08-28 . chapter 1awesome...i wish mine would work for me...lol
~E~ |
 antigonelives 2007-06-17 . chapter 1You say it just like I can't. Good poem, even at such a short length! |
 a silenced revolution 2007-06-13 . chapter 1If only my muse would always be there for me... I just hate it when she goes away... ANYWAY, great haiku! |
 continuous brevity 2007-06-04 . chapter 1very beautiful haiku! nice work. |
 Nemonus 2007-04-25 . chapter 1Good haiku. The second line expresses well the writer's feeling, especially in conjunction with the third. I hope she's "always there". Writer's block sometimes gets in the way. My muse, or the "entity" I think of as that, is a guy. He features in my story "Li", which is very different from this poem, but you might like to look at it. If not, that's fine. |