I like this a lot.. the scoliosis metaphor was awesome.. unique and perfect and I like the hopeful ending... great job

Wow, this was beautiful.. the descriptions were vivid, yet had a subtle darkness within them. The rhythm flowed nicely and I actually noticed the rhyme scheme. Overall, great job.

Hey long time no see! I came back for a lil visit to the site.
Your writing has improved greatly since I have last read your stuff! Way to improve!
I'm glad you kept writing!
~K~

this was a really pretty read. the rhyming is done perfectly but nicely subtle, & i like the simple structure- really works well with the poem. nicely written. ~Bex xx