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| Steff 2007-08-15 ch 12, anon. | abuseHi, I like your writing! you've got a nice writing style, I might add. too bad this one has so little chapters :x but anws, glad for the sequel! ps. +1 review! hehe and i did not just say 'eh' or ':)' :D:D:D |
| FM Radio 2007-07-24 ch 12,  | abuseYAY! Sequal! Okay, I already knew that but, oh well, sleep deprived and happy here! |
| FM Radio 2007-07-24 ch 11, | abuseYou keep on saying this is the END, but I see one more chapter! *note* I think I might be a little off because I am very sleep deprived. But I am still happy! |
| FM Radio 2007-07-24 ch 9, | abuse:) :) I gave you TWO smileys *laughs like a maniac* (smilies?) |
| FM Radio 2007-07-24 ch 3, | abuseThis is good, I didn't really get the first two chapers, this is more understandable. :) |
| Sin Girl7 2007-06-14 ch 12, | abuseI'm anxious to see how its going to be the sequel ;) |
| Writing-None-Genius 2007-06-04 ch 9, | abuseLike a bat out of hell? |
| ravenblaque 2007-05-31 ch 11, | abuseBravo! can't wait for the sequel! |
| ebonyprincess 2007-05-30 ch 11, | abuse:D i'm excited for a sequel! please email me or something when it comes! good job with the end, though it was sort of unrealistic for him to go all that way and her not even offer to wash up or something before meeting her parents. and her saying 'i love you'?? where did that come from? but whatever, you finished the story which is hard |
| Sin Girl7 2007-05-30 ch 11, | abuseWOW! TRIPLETS? LOL Nice, Sara!! xD Ohh, i loved the last part of the chapter, i don't know why i just loved it! And i really hope it wont take long till you post the sequel!! :D Nice work!! :D |
| Mrs. Drama Lover 2007-05-30 ch 11, | abuseThere DEFINATLY be a sequel |
| Carmel March 2007-05-30 ch 11, | abuseThank you for writing this. You've really and truly made my day every time I saw a new chapter was up. So, thanks for that :D I liked the ending. Satisfying, yet you left a bit for the reader to imagine. Nice job! I'll be on the lookout for more from you. ~carm~ |
| Eruwaedhiel 2007-05-30 ch 11, | abuseThat was a really good ending!! I am sad that, that is the end but I really don't think you should write a sequel. All it would do is draw out a really good story and make it horrible. |
| ind-fam 2007-05-30 ch 11, | abusenice. keep writing... |
| Roundtree 2007-05-30 ch 11, | abuseQuite good. Will you ever put on your story with Bryn and Ky, or the Midnight Groom story on here? |