Now that was a very fun to read first chapter! I'll read more later.

awsome story update soon plz

LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Sorry, no good review today. Can't think clearly if I'm laughing so much that I'm actually peeing my pants.

-laughs- This is a quite amusing story, I love writing stories like this myself, although they never seem to end up being published and therefore end up as some random files on my computer. But it is good to see other writers posting them ^^

Any chance you would like to share the story that inspired you to write this?

Oh, man, that was in equal parts embarassing and hilarious. Woo. Amazing story so far! Keep it up!

I, personally, love long chapters. And long books. I'm just a dork. lol. Great chapter - i felt the awkwardness just by reading it. On to the next chapter!

Aw...not a werewolf. I'm depressed now. lol. I do have to admit, even being slightly crazy myself, this girl does jump to some very strange and rather insane conclusions. I love the title though...so funny. Definitely an attention grabber. I'm rambling. So, anyways, great story so far.

lol...that was awesome. Very funny. I like where it's going.

cool story, bit shallow, but amusing all the same.

haha i loved this chappy! :D
lol killer barbie
i cant believe she actually screamed...

omg. this is the BEST story. its so funny and sam is just the best character. u jst need to update a little faster nd this story would b AMAZING. cant wait to read more

Damn it all, four hot dudes that are willing to buy all your shopping for you, thats practically heaven I tell you, hehehehehe, loved this chapter, so cool.
JM

i like this story a lot and i'll be keeping tabs on it. Sam is so oblivious lol. nd i like the whole killer barbie rule book lol. I must admit...it is odd how she just keeps running away but she's quirky so i don't mind lol.

update soon :)

LOL wow, I can't believe she ran! I like how you're making Sam more of a regular girl (one who is popular, likes shopping, ect.) than the usual girl (bookworm, nobody knows her, beautiful). I mean, who wouldn't notice a beautiful girl.

So, update soon, and I mean that. ;)

This story can always make me smile :) with the exception of some grammatical errors, it's a great story. Well done xo