| Reviews for Animal |
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Basara 4/24/07 . chapter 1well, in someway that's natural to me...very... so i can relate totally... hehe... nice! |
Ashelin 4/24/07 . chapter 1I loved the last line. Sorry I didn't review sooner, I'm just so freakin sick, it is disgusting. Anyway, great job on this. Short but really good. |
a silenced revolution 4/23/07 . chapter 1You do know that the first line is six syllables, right? But I don't really care. Tragic haiku. I hope you're not entirely "lifeless" though. |