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| Cataryn Michalek Hull 2007-07-03 ch 4,  | abusePlease write more soon since this chapter ended on a cliffhanger. |
| Cataryn Michalek Hull 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI have a question, Em. Where did that couch come from anyway? (You said that the room only had a bed and a dresser.) Thanks. |
| Music by Moonlight 2007-05-07 ch 4, | abuseWhy on earth does 'Her Majesty' want Anneliese as a daughter-in-law? Because her son's too stupid to catch a bride by his own talents? Because she thinks the tradition of marrying girls locked up in high towers should stay in the family? Because Anneliese is hotter than any other available Princess? Bye and please leave a review if you can. |
| Music by Moonlight 2007-05-07 ch 3, | abuseIn comes the Queen of Damsels in Distress and Prince Stupidity Impersonified's mom. The Apple Story was funny - but why wasn't she named Apple or Appliana or something? |
| Music by Moonlight 2007-05-07 ch 2, | abuseApparently Rapunzel's son inherited her genes. And the other princes are probably Cinderella's or Snow White's or other damsel-in-distresses' sons right? Seems like Anneliese is the Lady in Shining Armor and the guys are Princes in Distress. |
| Music by Moonlight 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuseVery funny. Anneliese is totally better than Rapy. Plus her name fits. And the witch is cool. |
| Kier Haliana 2007-05-06 ch 4, | abuseOh wow Rapunzel is a ** and a half. I think on my last review I didn't spell Rapunzel right...Oh well. Why would she just insult Anneliese and then tell her that she was marrying her son? That doesn't make much sense. I really like this story. Anneliese makes me laugh. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. |
| Kier Haliana 2007-05-06 ch 3, | abuseI think I would vomit from eating so many apples. The thought of it makes me want to vomit. Rupunzel has made an appearence...I wasn't expecting that. Anyway good chapter. Oh and I wanted to say this to you when I wrote my frist review. I love the name Emmeline. I call my friend that. |
| Kier Haliana 2007-05-06 ch 2, | abuseThat's a lot of princes. I would probably get annoyed with them too. Peter seems like a nice man. Nice chapter. |
| Kier Haliana 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseHeh, that's pretty funny. An independent woman! Nice. I like it. I'll be waiting for more. |