yes I hit a limit and now in order to continue this coonversation I have to review (and yes I'm reading what'd I'm reviewing and yes I like) but what happens when you hit the limit? lmao convo finished I guess! haha

Josh Groban didn't use you. GOD. How many times do I have to tell you that? Well, no, I don't care what you say. Don't argue with me; I'm right. I'm always right. It's what I get for being.. a loser. Ha ha. No, nice poem. I am just going to wander off into the twinkly, twinkly night even though it's.. 1:22 PM. WHATEVER. People always gotta act like they're better than me when I've got... A math book..

Holy **, Kari. Humor isn't anything without Superjoint Ritual in the background. My only concern is that some of the lines don't compliment each other and it's like a three way car crash. Wouldn't want to be caught up in that **.
(And just an FYI) There's no completion without a punctuation mark, dearie.

This is very reminiscent of a song and has a really good rhythym to it. That is probably the main reason why I like it. Which emotion did you channel this poem/lyrics through? In other words what were you feeling when you wrote this? You know now that I think about it, a lot of people are used for something everyday, even if they get paid for it. But even that won't stop me from prostituting my writing for hollywood. Anyway, enough about me, your writing is improving, each time I read it. Keep it up!