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heartfeltlove 2008-01-04 . chapter 1
Cool story!
Sweetly Sarcastic 2007-09-02 . chapter 1
wow, that's so... it's good writing, but a scary topic. jeez.

and on a somewhat unrelated topic, i did get the allusion to tam lin! it was a cute story. i guess he didn't get what he thought his fairy tale ending was though...
The Talented Mr. Evan 2007-04-30 . chapter 1
Well, this one reminded of 'Waiting for Ray', another story I wrote!

Conan's a nice name.

I saw this one coming though. I started mouthing 'schizophrenia' after the two first paragraphs, but it doesn't take away the thrill I felt when Deidre asked the kid to strangle his mom. And that he actually did it...!

Although eight years old is too young an age for a schizophreniac. Usually the first signs come around mid-to-late adolescence (at the earliest) and they're sometimes drug-induced.
FeralEyes 2007-04-23 . chapter 1
You so changed the title from when I read it the first time :P

It's still as good as ever.
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