Reviews for Sometimes I Wonder

hija de jesucristo
2007-05-08
ch 1,

abusebrennie, you're so funny. it's purdy, though. Can i use one of your poems for a creative writing project?

Agent Firefly
2007-04-27
ch 1,

abuseVery nice poem. My favorite line was: "Is he the one to make a half a whole?" And the reference to Song of Solomon fits in very well, too. Not only is this well-written, but I think it conveys your message clearly and sweetly.

Thank you for all the reviews on "Jump," I appreciate it. I will continue to update as I write it; I'm hoping to finish it within the year. Hopefully I will be back around to review more of your work later... :)

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