Short, but nicely written. Disappointed that there's not going to be more.

wow. That was... that was good. That really... gosh, I don't really know how to describe it. It was intense, it was harsh, it was powerful, it was ...real, I suppose. I'm such a fangirl for dark stuff but yeah, I really liked this. I think my favorite line was "another broken soul that wasn't worth fixing". I dunno. I think it was what struck me the hardest. Wasn't worth fixing. Yeah, that really hit home, and I'm not sure why.

Destroyist generation. i like it.

That was really good, heartfelt it seemed.

Haelo;p

Wow, what a powerful piece! I love the description and how everything that happens is so sudden. Good job!

Wow. I really, really liked this piece. Even though it was short it conveyed everything so perfectly.

Wonderful job, my dear.