no u cannot!! u evil woman! ur taking ur stories off? arghh! ok fine, u wanna publish. go ahead, leave ur fans disappointed and irritated coz theyve only read a lil bit of each story and cant get at the rest coz the authors taken it off...
aw...im so **!! i so wanted to read ur stories! could u maybe leave the jade bracelet up?

from
an utterly disgruntled reader
the lil deVil

aww man, i wanted to know how it ended!

Good luck with your publication quest! I enjoyed all of your stories, especially this one, and I hope to see it completed one day.

I'm a little sad that you won't finish this story... but I also wish you lots of luck with your publishing endeavors! Perhaps this story will eventually get completed anyway, either on FP or published? Whichever one, I hope you'll let us (your readers) know because I'm sure that I'm not the only one waiting to read more. Again, good luck!!

But you haven't even finished this one yet...

Oh my gawd!! I love this! I hope you plan on updating soon!

I love the writing but reading the part about Maddie was so sad, I wanted to cry myself.
I'm going to read the rest tonight. :D

-inspiration

Update update update! Please don't forget about this story!

I like it... why'd you stop writing? :(

This story's really beautiful. Pls. continue updating.

Wow, I love this story. The concept behind it, the plot, the characters -- Mother Cheveyo is so wise beyond her years, and Elan is just very poetic, reminds me of a young Shakespeare. And then Fannie/Fish, who is just obviously traumatized and yet, some of us can relate to her and having a fear or a feeling of reluctance towards something that was considered a peaceful friend and turned into an enemy. It's definitely original and so different from what I read around here. Keep up the great work-- this is definitely going on my favourites and I look forward to the next chapter, whenever that may be. Take your time-- I'm not asking you to update immediately. Seriously, it's beautiful... the story I meant. xD I'd love to know your inspiration for this particular plot and how you really developed this story.

Sincerely,
Brooke//sugarsweet007

i love this story!!

its so special and it has its own... really special something. lol i'm not even sure that makes sense but it is really good,watching for an update :D

This is a beautiful story. I don't know how else to describe it. True there is sadness, but there is beauty even in that. Emotion is flowing, living. Diamonds are but unchanging rocks. Don't ask. It's Twelve thirty and I work in the morning. Oops. I really love the story though. Can't wait til the next chapter.

hello! uve updated Georgia Swimmer yay! ive been waiting on more Fish and Elan although Elan wasnt in this chapter :-(
So we have someone stealing bikes and vandalizing stores. Im glad Francesca got to talk to Mother Cheveyo who talked about her sister Cat and how she tried to hate the sun etc. drawing parallels to Fish's situation.
I have no idea how you make Mother Cheveyo and Elan sound so poetic. it's amazing! well , i am glad you got your writing going again after your vacation.
Take care

Hi there! I haven't really reviewed any of the stories I've read for a while due to my lack of time, but I felt that I should tell you I've started reading this story and I really do enjoy it. I like the elder, (perhaps not the right word) Mother Cheveyo- if we all had one of her the world could be a different place- and the cultural ties. I also love the destination of this story. Sorry I haven't had time to critique you're entire story- which is probably better.
Good luck, and keep going.