Huzzah for sailing. It's a pleasant past time, I've heard.

I like the idea of the white-dyed robe, because it's like trying to be innocent and faily miserably because white stains so easily ...

Plus, the contrast between white robe and dark wood is quite sensational.

Felicia.

I like the idea of this, but it's feeling a bit abrupt to me. I mean, obviously these are going to be abrupt, but this one seems like it just cuts off in the middle of a thought. Pretty scene, though. Keep writing! :)

Great detail with this. I love how your still writing your unique poems. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.