My favorite line:

I think just the scent of you

Sends me on a joyride, sugar high

Good job overall D

Aw! I love it! *sigh* You're so lucky, Sarah, I wish I had a boyfriend that I could write poetry about.

this one was amazing. really...i loved it. awesome job.

This is a really nice collection of poetry... wish I could still write about someone that I love. Kind of an unexpected ending, though. Good work; keep writing.

-STIX-

I really like this poem, lovely free verse.

There's nothing I would change about it.

When I read this poem, I got moved by how you wrote your feelings towards that person, and how you described how you physically experienced it. This was a nice poem!

The Reverse Edge Blade

Aw, such a cute love poem! You should expand it. It'd make a cute short story.

aw, this is very sweet. i love it, great work.

This was really sweet, and I can kind of relate. Except it didn't really work out for me. I hope it does for you though! Thanks so much for your review by the way, and great job!

Ashelin