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anonymous sheep 8/17/08 . chapter 1My favorite line: I think just the scent of you Sends me on a joyride, sugar high Good job overall D |
Evangeline Graham 7/1/08 . chapter 5Aw! I love it! *sigh* You're so lucky, Sarah, I wish I had a boyfriend that I could write poetry about. |
continuous brevity 5/28/07 . chapter 4this one was amazing. really...i loved it. awesome job. |
mate.feed.kill.repeat 5/28/07 . chapter 4This is a really nice collection of poetry... wish I could still write about someone that I love. Kind of an unexpected ending, though. Good work; keep writing. -STIX- |
morethancarbon 5/27/07 . chapter 4I really like this poem, lovely free verse. There's nothing I would change about it. |
The Reverse Edge Blade 5/6/07 . chapter 1When I read this poem, I got moved by how you wrote your feelings towards that person, and how you described how you physically experienced it. This was a nice poem! The Reverse Edge Blade |
SassyLil'Thunderstorm 4/24/07 . chapter 1Aw, such a cute love poem! You should expand it. It'd make a cute short story. |
continuous brevity 4/24/07 . chapter 1aw, this is very sweet. i love it, great work. |
Ashelin 4/24/07 . chapter 1This was really sweet, and I can kind of relate. Except it didn't really work out for me. I hope it does for you though! Thanks so much for your review by the way, and great job! Ashelin |