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| anonymous sheep 2008-08-17 ch 1,  | abuseMy favorite line: I think just the scent of you Sends me on a joyride, sugar high Good job overall =D |
| StephenKingJunkie 2008-07-01 ch 5, | abuseAw! I love it! *sigh* You're so lucky, Sarah, I wish I had a boyfriend that I could write poetry about. |
| say this sooner 2007-05-28 ch 4, | abusethis one was amazing. really...i loved it. awesome job. |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-05-28 ch 4, | abuseThis is a really nice collection of poetry... wish I could still write about someone that I love. Kind of an unexpected ending, though. Good work; keep writing. -STIX- |
| morethancarbon 2007-05-27 ch 4, | abuseI really like this poem, lovely free verse. There's nothing I would change about it. |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWhen I read this poem, I got moved by how you wrote your feelings towards that person, and how you described how you physically experienced it. This was a nice poem! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| SassyLil'Thunderstorm 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseAw, such a cute love poem! You should expand it. It'd make a cute short story. |
| say this sooner 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseaw, this is very sweet. i love it, great work. |
| Ashelin 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was really sweet, and I can kind of relate. Except it didn't really work out for me. I hope it does for you though! Thanks so much for your review by the way, and great job! Ashelin |